I just finished playing all the way to the latest build and I have to say that I really enjoyed it! For only 2 builds in, there is a lot of story and overall writing which I enjoyed greatly. The writing and storytelling is really well done and I really like where the story is going. I also can't wait to get to know the love interests better in the next build. Definitely gonna be keeping an eye on this VN from now on. Keep up the amazing work!
c cool d'enfin voir un virtual novel crée par un français. (Je travaille sur le mien à coté mais il est loin d'avoir atteint un stade de développement suffisamment avancée pour que je puisse le publier ^^'. Je me demande même si je vais pouvoir le publier un jour :'( XD )
en vrai tu peux commencer quelque chose de sympa sans trop te prendre la tête. Le codage de ren'py est plutôt rudimentaire de base (bien que quelqu'un d'expérience peut rajouter des choses dessus). Perso je galère surtout car je ne dessinais pas sur tablette graphique avant et je trouve la transition papier à numérique assez inconfortable ^^'.
Enjoyed build 0.2 ^^_ nice to meet the full cast, and I gotta say, Maelbjorn and Vekad have just been added to my simp list~ n_n every1ne needs a tsundere stag or a cocksure bear in thier lives~ :p and I know Gilliant isn't a possible romance, but I dooo wish he was UwU that's 1ne hunky meow~ Rawr! ^///^ I love the MC's personality, he's so relatable, and xour writing style really helps to immerse us in the world. Great job, keep up the good work >.</
A really solid first build, made me intrigued to read more! :-)
I enjoyed the writing a lot. I especially liked the relationship between the MC and Erwan, they had great chemistry and an interesting dynamic, and even though I'm guessing we won't be seeing Erwan again, this makes me confident future characters are going to be interesting as well.
The setting is also pretty interesting, the marks remind me a lot of the dragonmarks of Eberron fame.
The VN has room to grow in terms of visuals and music, but what was there was serviceable, and I'm guessing you are going to have more assets to play with once we get to know the other main characters.
One small thing that was pretty noticeable while playing is that Akhet's sprites are not aligned, so every time his expression changes the whole sprite moves slightly. I would suggest fixing that because I doubt it was intentional. :-)
Thank you for your interest in NeveN, we really appreciate the feedback!
You should like the next build as well, since we intend to always improve on the storytelling and dialogues while fixing the problems you talk about here. There will be more characters and more sprites, and the problems of the first build will be fixed as well. Akhet's sprite will be aligned and the sprites in general will appear differently so that the whole thing will be easier on the eye.
Thanks again for the kind words, and we hope you will have as much fun to read as we have to write this story!
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I just finished playing all the way to the latest build and I have to say that I really enjoyed it! For only 2 builds in, there is a lot of story and overall writing which I enjoyed greatly. The writing and storytelling is really well done and I really like where the story is going. I also can't wait to get to know the love interests better in the next build. Definitely gonna be keeping an eye on this VN from now on. Keep up the amazing work!
We are really glad you liked it, the next build is coming soon so your wait will not be long! :)
Enjoyed the story and the characters. Sadly Gilliant isn't romanceable character ;-; Keep up the good work.
Thanks a lot!
Wait. What the fuck is this Is this. French? I can't fucking read French
It should be solved now!
c cool d'enfin voir un virtual novel crée par un français. (Je travaille sur le mien à coté mais il est loin d'avoir atteint un stade de développement suffisamment avancée pour que je puisse le publier ^^'. Je me demande même si je vais pouvoir le publier un jour :'( XD )
Pareil pour moi, je trouve ca tres sympa
D'ailleurs perso j'y connais R en création de visual novels, mais j'adorerais faire le mien
en vrai tu peux commencer quelque chose de sympa sans trop te prendre la tête. Le codage de ren'py est plutôt rudimentaire de base (bien que quelqu'un d'expérience peut rajouter des choses dessus). Perso je galère surtout car je ne dessinais pas sur tablette graphique avant et je trouve la transition papier à numérique assez inconfortable ^^'.
Enjoyed build 0.2 ^^_ nice to meet the full cast, and I gotta say, Maelbjorn and Vekad have just been added to my simp list~ n_n every1ne needs a tsundere stag or a cocksure bear in thier lives~ :p and I know Gilliant isn't a possible romance, but I dooo wish he was UwU that's 1ne hunky meow~ Rawr! ^///^ I love the MC's personality, he's so relatable, and xour writing style really helps to immerse us in the world. Great job, keep up the good work >.</
Quick question, will there be CG artwork in this VN?
Yes, there will be CG in the future!
A really solid first build, made me intrigued to read more! :-)
I enjoyed the writing a lot. I especially liked the relationship between the MC and Erwan, they had great chemistry and an interesting dynamic, and even though I'm guessing we won't be seeing Erwan again, this makes me confident future characters are going to be interesting as well.
The setting is also pretty interesting, the marks remind me a lot of the dragonmarks of Eberron fame.
The VN has room to grow in terms of visuals and music, but what was there was serviceable, and I'm guessing you are going to have more assets to play with once we get to know the other main characters.
One small thing that was pretty noticeable while playing is that Akhet's sprites are not aligned, so every time his expression changes the whole sprite moves slightly. I would suggest fixing that because I doubt it was intentional. :-)
Keep up the good work!
Thank you for your interest in NeveN, we really appreciate the feedback!
You should like the next build as well, since we intend to always improve on the storytelling and dialogues while fixing the problems you talk about here. There will be more characters and more sprites, and the problems of the first build will be fixed as well. Akhet's sprite will be aligned and the sprites in general will appear differently so that the whole thing will be easier on the eye.
Thanks again for the kind words, and we hope you will have as much fun to read as we have to write this story!
Very nice project, congratulations for this launch. I can't wait to see the sequel.
Thanks a lot! Really glad you like our work.
Really good so far~ ^^_ I can just tell that this is going to be 1ne of the greats~ keep up the good work! >_</
Woaw, as a VN's fan, that's quite a big compliment you gave us!
Je suis intrigué, je vais très surement essayer ^^
vas-tu faire une version mobile?
On y travaille, si tout va bien elle devrait arriver relativement rapidement !
cool merci =)
Definitely gonna check out!
Thanks a lot for taking interest for our story!
Great VN... The Tale about musician and adventure.
Can't wait for More ^^
We're happy to have you with us on this adventure! :)